Wednesday, 30 March 2011

Once Upon a Time There Was a Girl Who Blogged


I am returned, feeling much better and tomorrow I will actually have a review up. Thanks so much for all your nice messages (and especially Jeanne thanks for the lines of poetry). Colds are rotten, aren’t they? But at least it wasn’t the flu, which I had once and NOOOOO never again darken my door. Just a drop by today then to announce my intent to take part in this year’s Once Upon a Time Challenge. This year I’m going to take part in The Journey version of this challenge, where participants can read just one book, in order to take any challenge related pressure off my back.


I’m hoping to read at least two books instead of just one and those books are: ‘The World More Full of Weeping’ - Robert J Wiersema which features kids getting lost in the woods and a mysterious wood dwelling girl


‘Demonglass’ – Rachel Hawkins the snarky, much anticipated sequel to ‘Hex Hall’ which I keep totally inaccurately thinking of as ‘Hogwarts for girls’. It’s set in a magical boarding school and the main character must fight evil, but apart from that shares no similarities with HP at all, except for the fact that it is also super awesome


Happy end of week to you all. Hopefully you'll be seeing a lot more of me from now on.

Monday, 21 March 2011

Things To End When I am in Charge: Item One - Colds

Dear everyone, *cough, cough* the cold virus decided to make a liar of all my ‘I’m fine’ comments, which means you find me seriously miserable and full of cold again. The really bad bit is over (last Wednesday night I went from alright to tender and awful in about ten minutes), my throat is better, but there’s nothing nice about blowing your nose fifty times a day #oversharing. The worst of it is I had some time off sick the first time I was ill and so now I have to go to work unless I can’t stand up/ insert other horrible non-work appropriate things you can think of. These things have not happened (which despite being at work, folding leaflets, feeling like my head might pop I am glad of that) so to the office I go armed with blackcurrant Lemsip until I am better.

I have been working on writing things elsewhere in the last few days, but I haven’t had the inclination to also write reviews. I finished ‘Shipbreaker’ (awesome), ‘The Knife of Never Letting Go’ (also awesome) and am halfway through Behemoth (guess what, again it is awesome). There’s more I’ll be saying about each title when I review them and each review will not be just ‘I liked it a bunch, squee’ but right now my easy to type in one sentence feeling is that young adult sci-fi adventure where both boys and girls get to go adventuring is a trend it might take a long time to tire of.

Hopefully I’ll be better soon and I’ll get something up on the Nebula contenders for The Booksmuggler’s readalong this weekend. Until then if any of you in the UK fancy a lend of my copy of ‘Shipbreaker’ let me know and I’ll send it on, it’s good, fantasy violent fun with a narrator I wish was getting a sequel.

Wednesday, 16 March 2011

Orange Ladies (No Spray Tan Necessary)


It’s Orange long list day! Is everybody happy to see the return of the book prize that is all ladies, all the time?!

Here’s the full long list, which I nabbed from
Simon at Savidge Reads post:

• Lyrics Alley – Leila Aboulela
• Jamrach’s Menagerie – Carol Birch
• Room – Emma Donoghue
• The Pleasure Seekers – Tishani Doshi
• Whatever You Love – Louise Doughty
• A Visit from the Goon Squad – Jennifer Egan
• The Memory of Love – Aminatta Forna
• The London Train – Tessa Hadley
• Grace Williams Says it Loud – Emma Henderson
• The Seas – Samantha Hunt
• The Birth of Love – Joanna Kavenna
• Great House – Nicole Krauss
• The Road to Wanting – Wendy Law-Yone
• The Tiger’s Wife – Téa Obreht
• The Invisible Bridge – Julie Orringer
• Repeat it Today with Tears – Anne Peile
• Swamplandia! – Karen Russell
• The Secret Lives of Baba Segi’s Wives – Lola Shoneyin
• The Swimmer – Roma Tearne
• Annabel – Kathleen Winter

This may be the biggest test my reading ban has faced yet. I’ve only read one (
‘Annabel’ for the indie lit awards which was very good) and own another one (‘Room’ of which I am scared). I already know that I want to read at five other books on the longlist (‘The Tiger’s Wife’, ‘Swamplandia!’, ‘The Secret Lives of Baba Segi’s Wives’, ‘A Visit from the Goon Squad’ and ‘The Seas’). What will my wanting list look like after I investigate the rest of the list?

Thanks to Simon’s post
guessing what might be on the list I am adding lots of other books to my list. The 'want to read' notebook is officially almost full and this is worrying, because I’m pretty sure it contains more books than I can read in a life time.

Which books from the long list are you excited about? Has anyone already read enough of the list to hazard shortlist predictions?

Sunday, 13 March 2011

The Adjustment Bureau

Oh this is going to be such a negative post, which is a shame because I don't often take a whole post to review one film, but it can't be helped. I first need to make a few things clear, because I am going to have to talk about religious elements of the film and I think everyone knows that can lead to misunderstandings, especially when you’re a non-believing blogger. So some disclaimers and explanations:

1.) The Adjustment Bureau is a religious movie. As such at time the beliefs expressed in this film directly contradict my world view


2.) I’ve watched, read and enjoyed a lot of media over the year that expresses ideas that contradict my religious world view (films and books that clearly express the uncontested belief that God exists and that there’s a divine plan) and have never really felt uneasy about taking in this media. Everyone gets to believe their things, I’ll go on believing mine and we’ll all watch media about each others beliefs for the benefits that can bring (understanding, the possible realisation of chances for compromise between different groups, or just straight up entertainment from an interesting source)

3.) I’m not especially fond of some of the logic constructs, which are linked to religious beliefs, that crop up in books like Narnia and I’d try to argue against them reasonably, with the understanding that anyone else is free to dispute my ideas as long as they’re not offensive and they don’t expect to convert me to their way of thinking. At the same time I don’t necessarily feel like I always want to put down media which contains religious views that do lead towards an offensive contradiction to the way I see the world. For example, I find he way that Narnia presents puberty troublesome and its treatment of Susan misogynistic, the books expression of these views are linked to the religious structure that informs the text, but I don’t feel the need to hurl the book at the wall. The reasons for this are many and complicated.

4.) There has been one time in my whole life that I can remember where religious ideas expressed, without critique, in a book made me so uneasy I could find no way to be satisfied with this type of free argument structure. That book did actually contain offensive material towards another religious group, I felt the views being expressed were so dead wrong and I think everybody has their own tolerance level for how much uncritiqued offence they can watch go by in media before they need to put it down.

5.) Watching The Adjustment Bureau was not quite the same, because the films expression of how a divine plan works doesn’t express prejudice against one particular group, but against the entirety of humanity. The idea that humanity is not a good species is something I’ve seen expressed in lots of places, but I found the expression of that idea in this film particularly distasteful because it was linked to religious logic and the logic seemed sloppy. I hold my hands up and make clear my personal bias here – I don’t like religious theory expressing ideas that humanity is a big bunch of wasters who can’t do anything right and so I did not enjoy this element of the film, but I might have been more tolerant of a piece of media expressing this view if a.) the logic behind it were more robust b.) it wasn’t linked to religion

6.) I fully understand that just because I felt extremely uneasy about the ideas being expressed in this film they do not remove my right to believe in what I believe in, nor are they offensive just because I find them squicky

7.) Just because there is no substantial opposing theory offered to these ideas does not make this film a bad work of art (although it is for other reasons) or a propaganda piece. Many pieces of art only show one side of an argument and are effective works of art/not propoaganda

8.) I am not calling for censorship of the expression of alternative ideas to mine, nor am I saying ‘I can’t watch this, it has religion in it’. I just need to explain that part of what made this particular film so awful for me to watch had to do with the logic behind the metaphorical examination of divine control

9.) I don’t want to imply that all religious people would agree with the views expressed in this film, or that these views ‘should’ be something nice, religious people stand against – we probably wouldn’t get along if they thought all of humanity was a waste of space (and there’s a big difference between that and thinking humanity has flaws), but y’know they get to say whatever they want because that’s how free speech works

10.) There were many other reasons why I didn’t like this film besides the fact that I found the way ideas I did not agree with hard to take in this one piece of media

In 'The Adjustment Bureau' human life is controlled by The Adjustment Bureau, shady men who dress like 50s government agents with trilbys and grey trenchcoats (yes all of them are men). They must make sure that every human life sticks to The Plan, which is written by The Chairman (for who we humans have many names, hint one of those names is God). Matt Damon’s character David Norris, meets Emily Blunt’s character Elise (actually do we ever find out her second name?) and forms a quick romantic connection with her. According to The Plan they’re not supposed to be together after that one kiss and it’s only because David’s ‘guardian
agent' Harry falls asleep at a crucial moment that they meet again. David also arrives at his office earlier than he is supposed to and so sees members of the bureau ‘adjusting’ his colleagues brains so they’ll agree with Norris’ solar power project. The plan is well and truly off track.

A lot of reviews are calling this film an examination of free will vs predestination, which I find odd because there is no substantial examination of free will. The film proposes a world where the divine plan, run by The Chairman, really exists and no matter how they might try humans cannot change the plan themselves. Free will does not exist in the world of ‘The Adjustment Bureau’. Well that’s not quite right, humans are allowed free will in small matters, for example what drink to get on the way to work. In the big matters humans may think about exercising their free will (as in the impulse for free will still exists), but any unknowing attempt to deviate from The Plan in a significant way will be corrected before the human being can put their free will into action. Basically, humans have free will in thought, but in action they’re strictly controlled.

At first it seems like David and Elise's attempts to be together show that free will really does exist and can change The Plan. However, it emerges that they only want to be together because The Plan is always being rewritten. In earlier versions they were meant to be together and these versions keep poking through into reality. In the end David gets the relationship he wants, which isn’t in The plan, not through his own free will but because the fact that he and Elise fight for their relationship shows The Chairman something that makes him change The Plan. As the voice over moral at the end tells us (paraphrased) ‘what the creator really wants is for humans to keep fighting for the life they want, to keep overcoming the hurdles he puts in their way and then what they want becomes part of The Plan’. Now, that is not free will as I understand it, although I don't have enough religious knowledge to know whether this kind of interpretation of free will makes sense in terms of the major religions. By my understanding of free will this ending makes ‘The Adjustment Bureau’ a film that wants the audience to believe it has shown free will at work, changing human lives, but has actually shown them how a divine plan might adjust so that your free will wishes become part of the plan. And this only happens if you’re very exceptional people, the rest of humanity that plods along refusing to fight hurdles, is undeserving of free will and continues to exist in a controlled state while David and Elise go ‘free’ this time.

I find this version of the way the world works contrary to my beliefs (see disclaimers above) as well as rather troubling, but the point where I actually swore out loud at the screen from frustration came in the middle of the film, when an agent known as The Hammer explains that humans used to have free will, but that control was taken back by the maker of The Plan. At certain points in history The Chairman apparently stepped back from control and gave people free will. The first time resulted in The Dark Ages, and when control was released again in the nineteenth century humans to brought about WWI and WWII. When David asks how why the world is still kind of bad now, despite the bureau taking back control, The Hammer provides an answer to the effect of ‘We’re still working to get it back on track’. These seem extremely poorly constructed rhetorical arguments (for one thing they ignore any good that may have come out of other events taking place during the time periods when control was released and ignores any bad stuff that came about in time periods where The Chairman exerted control like The Enlightenment). The Hammer’s view is also the most depressing assessment of humanity I’ve ever heard expressed and to hear that it’s backed by The Chairman, by the all powerful being that made and controls the entire world, leaves no room for the audience to say ‘well maybe that’s just the view of his imperfect servants, perhaps God has more faith in us’. It’s just a hugely condemnatory way to approach the entirety of humanity and it makes me really sad to see something created that would cast every person in humanity, not just as flawed, but as pretty much worthless, immoral, unpleasant characters. I guess I don’t understand how a persons religion could lead them to such an idea (and yes, again I note my bias that if someone were to present this idea without any religious links it might have less of a powerful effect on me).

Shall we move on to what else I didn’t like about this film:

Elise: Elise is in this film…why? Oh right to be a love interest, for shots of her legs in a short skirt and…um.... to provide the drive for David to continue to try to exert his free will! I mean…she has no agency, the plot devices in the film make sure that she can't be told anything that would lead to her having agency and at the end of the film when David tells her that if they stay together all her dreams will disappear it takes her about a second to agrees to follow him where he leads, in order to see if they can beat The Plan. I mean take at least a pregnant pause of drama to decide whether you want to risk your career aspirations and dreams for this guy.

Also there’s a definite vibe towards the end that to be successful in a high profile way is preferable to being successful in a less high profile way. Elise will be one of the greatest dancers and choreographers of the age if David leaves her, but if he stays with her she will ‘end up teaching dance to six year olds’. I get that if your dream is to be a great choreographer and in the end you don’t get there that doing anything else might be a bit of a let down, but we can’t know if it would be a let down for Elise for no one is allowed to ask her. Perhaps she would trade high profile success for lower profile success because teaching children might be fulfilling to her. Perhaps she would resent David forever if he killed her dreams of being a high profile dancer. Who knows? Instead of a real answer we get this really awful implied assumption that to be a teacher (which is a traditionally female role, especially when you add in ‘dance teacher’ and ‘teacher younger children’) is fundamentally a lesser job and less desirable than high profile success.

Weak sci-fi: Really, is it even worthy of the name sci-fi? The adjustment agents have hats that let them open special doors that take them to a new location, which can be anywhere in the world. How the hats work is not explained. Large areas of water, or rain, shield people from the agents ability to control circumstances. Again there is no explanation. The most decent sci-fi element is The Plan, which appears as a constantly changing diagram in notebooks that the agents carry around. There’s no explanation of how they function, or how many plans fit in a notebook, but the effect does at least look cool. Are these sci-fi elements symbolic in some way?

Theories on romance: The bit where I really lost it with this film came towards the end. David asks why the bureau cares so much that he doesn’t end up with Elise and Harry answers that if he ends up with her she will be ‘enough’. David won’t need to strive to be a Senator anymore, because that hole that drives him to be in front of crowds will be filled by Elise. The Plan needs him to be a Senator because he’s going to do great things (although these great things are unspecified, but I can let that go because maybe Harry is bound by the great rule of all sci-fi - you can’t tell people what you know about the future).

Yep that’s how life works. Once you find the perfect partner they are the only thing you need and any grand career aspirations are exposed as a simple reaction to a lack of domestic approval, attention and love. Clearly every successful, high profile person is walking around with just a little part of them missing, because they haven’t found The One yet.

And there are other weird, littler things about romance that crop up in the dialogue. David and Elise have a conversation where she asks how he knows she doesn’t have a fabulous boyfriend now, it is three years after they first met after all. David is pretty clear that it would not matter if she did, he would persist, but he says (paraphrasing) that if she were married then that would be a problem. *Sigh* because marriage is the only romantic commitment that a.) can’t be broken b.) should be respected by outsiders who fancy you right? *Sigh*

More on women: In a film so lacking in the women, that makes Elise’s character into a cross between manic pixie girl, a woman with one interest (although I did like the way this creative drive was represented in the film, for example when she is unsure about her wedding she goes to her studio to dance to try and work things out - nice) and a woman with no agency I am suspicious of every little reference made to the ladies in this film. So when Harry says (paraphrase) ‘your father could have been so much more and your brother could too, if they both hadn’t died, but it wasn’t in The Plan’ and David asks if his mother was also a casualty of the plan, but is told her death was ‘just chance’ I am ragingly suspicious in the way I interpret that remark. The lady in his family isn’t mentioned as someone who wanted to, in fact could have, been more and she apparently wasn’t important enough to have a place in The Plan that meant she had to be removed from earth.

So that was (not) a fun night at the cinema. I’m also kind of sad to find out that this film is based on a Philip K Dick story. Does anyone know how closely it sticks to the source material? Has anyone else seen this film and what did you think of it?

Thursday, 10 March 2011

March Readalongs

I’ve been off work sick for a few days (everyone seems to be toppling with March colds and while I'm back at work my sinuses still don't feel quite right in dry office conditions) and that’s why I’ve been missing around these parts. I just thought I’d give you a wave and a little notification of what readalongs I’m planning to join in March:

‘Shipbreaker’ - Paolo Bacigalupi and ‘Behemoth’ - Scott Westerfeld for The Booksmuggler’s
Nebula readathon. I’m 100 pages into ‘Shipbreaker’ now and really enjoying it already.

‘Prospero Lost’ - J G Lamplighter for the
Women of Fantasy Book Club.

‘The Knife of Never Letting Go’ - Patrick Ness for
Calico Reaction's Book Club, which is a reading group I haven’t read with before.

I’ve already finished Karen Mahoney’s
'Iron Witch’. it continue
Four other literary things

Last weekend I saw Romeo and Juliet at the new theatre in Stratford, with some of my favourite members of the Royal Shakespeare Company playing the title roles. More on this later when my head is properly cleared.

The next day I saw Gnomeo and Juliet, which follows the ‘doomed lovers’ storyline in the main, but is otherwise delightfully far away from canon. Elton John songs, references to other films (including one to ‘Brokeback Mountain’ which officially won this film my love) and drag racing lawnmowers which will put you so in mind of Grease. It’s sentimental of course, but there’s also quite a bit of funny and a glob of good heart. Your heart would have to be a little stone ninja bunny not to crack just a leetle bit.

I’m entering the third month of my book buying ban and I am beginning to jonesy for a new book fix (litlove, this is my attempt to keep working that idea of books as healthy but addictive into my blogging). I’ve said I’ll enter into another three month ban with Peta at the end of this one and go until June, which, if you could see my room you would clap hard as a very good idea. Still nnnhhh, bites down.

Do you know the
24 hour read-a-thon, or Dewey's read-a-thon is on April 9th 2011? Hurray!

Adieu, until I am fully none sniffley everyone.

Friday, 4 March 2011

'Sea of Poppies' - Amitav Ghosh

A young mother called Deeti finds herself having visions of a ship with large sales around the time her opium addicted husband begins to die.

Pauletta, the ward of a restrictive Christian businessman, tries to return to the freer style of life she enjoyed with her father.

Neel, a Raja deeply in debt, struggles to keep up appearances and dodge the clutches of manipulative English creditors.

Zachary, a freed African American slave, finds that assumptions that he is white allow him to climb the up the ranks of his ship.

All these characters and more are destined to eventually meet on board a refitted slaver ship called the Ibis.

I suspect that I like ‘Sea of Poppies’ so much because its action centres around the nineteenth century opium trade, a historical issue I’ve been interested in for a while. It’s a book that puts forward the same kind of arguments I would about the negative aspects of the opium trade and the cynical British involvement behind the production of opium, so I’ll admit I was already primed to like this novel.

At the beginning of the novel Deeti plants this years poppy crop alone as her husband, who works at the opium factory, has been taken ill. Through Deeti’s narrative Amitav Ghosh begins to explain how the poppy crop has been forced on the Indian farmers, to the exclusion of all other crops:

‘…no one was inclined to plant more because of all the work it took to grow poppies – fifteen ploughings of the land and every remaining clod to be broken by hand, with a dantoli; fences and buns to be built; purchases of manure and constant watering; and after all that, the frenzy of the harvest, each bulb having to be individually nicked and scraped. Such punishment was bearable when you had a patch or two of poppies – but what sane person would want to multiply these labours when there were better, more useful crops to grow, like wheat, dal, vegatables? But those toothsome winter crops were steadily shrinking in acreage: now the factory’s appetite for opium seemed never to be sated. Come the cold weather, the English sahibs would allow little else to be planets; their agents would go from home to home, forcing cash advances on farmers, making them sign asami contracts. It was impossible to say no to them; if you refused they would leave their silver hidden in your house, or throw it through a window.’

In ‘Sea of Poppies’ the opium trade is shown as an industry which causes the degeneration of India as the crop is planted to exclusion, causing Indian farmers to struggle to feed themselves. British arguments for the continued trade are illustrated, so that the reader sees the (harmful) contextual logic that the British used to justify the opium trade and to ignore the realities of the addiction they were creating in India and China. The British Mr Burnham, who is usually the one leading conversations about the rightness of the opium trade, or slavery says things like ‘The war when it comes, will not be for opium. It will be for a principle: for freedom – for the freedom of trade and for the freedom of the Chinese people. Free Trade is a right conferred on man by God and its principles apply as much to opium as to any other article of trade.’

What follows is an instructional set piece conversation between Mr Burnham, Zachary Reed and Neel about the ways in which opium supposedly benefits the Indian people. Zachary and Neel query Mr Burnham’s views and each time their points, for example ‘is it not true there is a great deal of addiction and intoxication in China? Surely such afflictions are not pleasing to our creator’ are answered by Burnham. What I like about these exchanges is that the two characters who don’t yet have fixed views on the trade don’t immediately recognise the wrongness of Burnham’s views and come out in violent opposition to Burnham’s ideas. Neel is convinced by some of his arguments and Zachary is naïve at this point in the book, easily stirred if Burnham links his conclusions with patriotism. In fact the first person to really object to Burnham’s ideas is Captain Chillingworth, the character who makes his money shipping Indian indentured workers in a decommissioned slave ship. Ghosh creates characters with realistic attitudes that fit their time period, as well as their individual circumstances. To an extent he avoids a one-dimensional alignment between modern, liberal values and sympathetic, heroic characters, choosing to make his heroes more nuanced through their privilege and misunderstanding and to make characters that modern readers might not automatically sympathise with possess liberal opinions for their time.

The villains in ‘Sea of Poppies’ are more clear cut. There’s little indication that characters like Mr Burnham, or Deeti’s rapist male relatives should be given sympathy. In fact Mr Burnham’s bad character is suddenly, crudely emphasised when Paulette tells Zachary he has asked her to spank him (she is his dependent ward and he asks her this during late night Bible instruction). This revelation comes suddenly and there aren’t any clues in the earlier text that suggest Mr Burnham is a pervert set on abusing his ward, which means that Paulette’s revelation feels like an attempt at concretely demonising Mr Burnham, setting him up as a man who is definitely bad. This is unnecessary, as the reader has already spent a good portion of time being exposed to Burnham’s unpleasant character and it seems obvious that he is the villain of this novel.

What stops the novel’s clear, decided expression of one historical perspective (the damn right perspective) from becoming overly didactic is how complex Ghosh makes the male characters who sit somewhere in between hero and villain, like Neel and Baboo Nob Kissin, Mr Burnham’s agent. Each one flawed in some way, even though they are also easy for the reader to sympathise with because of their circumstances. Neel, horribly mistreated, but at the beginning of the book he is proud and obsessed with caste. Zachary who the reader will be willing to keep climbing the ranks is unable to view Paulette as an equal, even when idealising her puts her in danger and doesn’t really understand that his shipboard career is based on the oppression of others. Baboo Nob Kissin only wants to build a shrine to his departed aunt, but he was involved in robbing Neel of his status and property. Most of the heroic male characters slowly reveal how their own privilege in some way allows them to elevate themselves over others, even as they continue to act like brave characters, or are oppressed by others.

In contrast the most ideally heroic characters of the book are women. There are vile female characters around like Mrs Burnham, but there aren’t really any women that fall into that middle category of flawed heroines. The women are either reprehensible (Mrs Burnham , Deeti’s dead mother in law) or ideal, if not uncomplicated (Deeti, Paulette).

I think Ghosh displays a really clever, sensitive touch for writing characters in this novel. I wouldn’t say this is an entirely realistic book, or that it always follows the traditions of realistic storytelling, so I’ll hold off on saying he writes totally realistic, human beings (maybe that’s why I feel a bit more forgiving about his ideal, straight down the line heroines) but he definitely creates characters that readers can care about. The plot of this book alone is full of detail and is entertaining, but I’m convinced it’s the characters that make this novel enjoyable, not just the constantly developing plot that brings them together. Child bride flees village with lower caste lover, sounds like a typical plot, the individuality of Deeti and Kalua are what make it interesting once you get past the initial thrill of watching their peril filled escape. When the author combines that sort of thrill with something deeper that comes out through the characters, I still care about the characters when the drama slows down and the characters take a breather - that’s what makes me feel a book has been successful at getting inside my head. Characters don’t always have to be physically active to interest me, but they should always be convincingly emotionally active, even if what they’re expressing is a quieter emotional sentiment.

‘Sea of Poppies’ is a good fit for my personal historical politics and it thrills me that people might learn more about the hard circumstances that the opium trade pushed on people in China by reading some popular literary fiction. It was also interesting to see the opium trade examined with a different emphasis than the one I learned the most about. Ghosh’s book is primarily set in India, the country that grew the bulk of the opium crop, before China was bullied into growing large quantities, while I learnt about opium wars and addiction with a focus on how it affected Chinese people. There’s also lots of in depth, but easy to follow, information to be gained about the physical methods of growing, manufacturing and taking opium. I like learning from historical, because I am a history geek :)

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Thursday, 3 March 2011

'Branwell' - Douglas A Martin

I’m definitely in one of those moods where I want to read everything right now and reading 'Branwell’ by Douglas A Martin did not help me cut down my reading options. Now I really want to go on a Bronte spree. Perhaps it’s time to brave my fear of Heathcliff drowning a puppy and crack of with ‘Wuthering Heights’. Does anyone know if there is puppy drowning in the Tom Hardy BBC version? Please say no.

‘Branwell’ is a piece of historical, literary fiction that mostly focuses on the only Bronte son, Patrick Branwell Bronte, from his early childhood to his death. As the only son Branwell is coddled. He’s kept home from public school for longer than the rest of the children and all the other members of the family channel their energy into making sure that as the boy he can pursue whatever he desires. This freedom comes with the heavy responsibility. He is expected to be good at something, exceptionally talented even and must progress quickly in his career so that he can one day support his three surviving sisters. The book moves around between two opposing views of Branwell: the layabout, drunkard whose inability to apply himself leads him to destroy his life and the young man who could have been a decent, regular man (or even possibly an artist) if only his family had encouraged him productively.

Branwell’s life and character is best understood by looking at the areas in which these two views intersect. Watching the young man grow up to be a decent, but ungifted portrait painter the reader sees that his family pushes him towards greatness without giving him the proper tools to first learn how to be great. They provide a studio, paint, freedom, but neglect things like a decent teacher and instruction in discipline. At the same time Branwell is given the money to go to London and enrol at The Royal Academy, but he spends his money on drink at a pub frequented by famous boxers and goes home a few days later to tell him family he’s been robbed. The reader can see that a balance of his own unwillingness to discipline himself and his family’s expectations undo him and the reader is often asked to sympathise with one person (Branwell, or one of his sisters) only to quickly be reminded that the other person also deserves sympathy. ‘Branwell’ is a novel made up of a continual struggle for understanding between a range of flawed characters and as all the characters are so flawed, but at the same time so sympathetic, the reader is kept from judging anyone too harshly, or picking a ‘hero’ character to support.

‘Branwell’ is a fascinating book, not just because of the personality that it investigates, but because of the effects produced by the stylistic elements that Martin uses to build this historical novel. The narrative voice is third person present, a choice that distances the reader from Branwell and distance proves to be just what readers of this novel needs. The reader needs to feel affection for Branwell, but Martin doesn’t need them to be entirely sympathetic to everything Branwell does. The novel seeks to avoid the cliché of Branwell as solely a tragic, misunderstood genius and third person narrative keeps the reader from falling completely under the spell of the way this novel shows Barnwell thought of himself (tragic, just about to make something of himself, destined for greatness, helped by drink). Somehow making the third person narrative predominantly present tense increases that distance, making Branwell a character who can be viewed objectively.

The use of present tense has the effect of making the narrative feel immediate and active, which is useful because Branwell’s live is racy, but often very inactive and the use of present tense narrative gives the novel much more pace. The Publishers Weekly review quoted in the front of the book talks about the novel’s large use of ‘declarative sentences’, for example in passages like:


‘They will have to work. Emily was not to marry. Nor Anne. Nor their brother. Only Charlotte, who would one day be in a position, when they were all gone, to speak for them all.’

This stylistic choice again increases the active feel of the narrative. It also makes the novel’s examination of Branwell feel like a factual historical account, even though many of the declarative sentences deal in psychological details and assessments that historians would struggle to find evidence for. The use of the future tense in some of these declarative sentences lends a prophetic quality to the novel, which again reminds the reader that while they are involved in Branwell’s story they’re at the same time distanced from it by history. Their emotion at the content of the story doesn’t mean they have to ignore their ability to judge Branwell’s behaviour objectively. So Martin’s choice of narrative style, devices and sometimes even tenses creates these different reactions in the reader, who moves between active emotional connection, and objective, distanced judgement.

At the same time it’s frustrating that sometimes this book takes the complexity of its style so far that it blocks the readers understanding (and doesn’t that make me sound uneducated and what follows is probably going to show my up for my seriously basic grammar knowledge). What drove me off my hinges was the use of so many different tenses within pages, or sometimes just within paragraphs, of each other. Present tense, past tense, future tense:

‘His father wants to take the boy’s mind off all these things he goes silent under’ (Page 16)

‘Then their father wanted all of them back home…’ (Page 17)

‘They would spend the next six years all home together…’ (Page 17)

can all be found in close proximity to each other and seem to be applied to describing different characters actions with no consistent strategy. Often the use of so many conflicting tenses ends up confusing the structure of the book and distracting the reader from the meaning of the text. Sometimes the tense will switch in the middle of a sentence, for example ‘They are too fond of fighting, even themselves, when they felt so threatened’. And sometimes sentences just feel like they are constructed the wrong way round, so that their sense is distorted, for example ‘Everyone he tells her husband is dying and how he’d seen him treating her horribly’.

When used in conjunction with a general writing style that is disjointed and approaches a third person stream of conscious style, the frequency of tense changes and unusually arranged sentences, seem deliberate attempts at literary experimentation, but just because they can be claimed as experimental devices, that doesn’t mean they work to enhance the novel. It’s often quite hard to discern a reason for the continual tense changes. I’m going to take a view that they’re designed to increase the readers uncertainty about what can be pinned down as truth and maybe to reflect the general confusion of Branwell’s mind and life (although I’ve got to credit that idea to my mum). My main conclusion is that it can be quite hard to progress through this book the book if you’re determined to puzzle out what the point is of all the different tense changes and in my view, you’re best just barrelling through this stylistic touch if you want to finish and enjoy ‘Branwell’ (yep I think I’ve officially crossed the line into literary heathen now).

From what I can gather from
Wikipedia (I know, sooo reliable) ‘Branwell’ is also a work of revisionist historical fiction, as it argues that Branwell was not sacked from his tutoring job at Throp Green because he was having an affair with the master’s wife, but because it was believed he was having sex with his eleven year old pupil. Martin cheekily never confirms this theory, in fact he even gently mocks the readers need to know the truth:

‘Dear Reader, you want to be told now that you’ve understood. That he might be doing just what you think he might be, and in just what way. You want to be sure.’ .

He heavily suggests that Branwell’s pupil, Edmund Robinson is gay and that he is infatuated with his tutor. He makes it pretty clear that Branwell is attracted to men. Any portrayal of consummation is always deliberately indistinct and although readers will come away with the impression that Branwell has slept with men, clear phrases are never used to describe his relationships with men. The true extent of his relationships is clouded by the ambiguous literary style in which they are described, which means the reader must speculate about what the words really mean and about who is involved as these things are never clarified in the text. Yet at the same time the particular words that describe his meetings with grooms in the stable, or his feelings about his friend John Brown encourage the reader to speculate in one particular way. I don’t think Martin ever intends there to be space in this narrative for the reader to doubt whether Branwell is having sexual relationships with men, but he draws back time and again from showing a clear, uncontested image of Branwell sleeping with a man.

Martin takes a similar approach to writing about the alleged affair Branwell has with his pupil. Readers know that Branwell takes his charge down to the stables, which is the site of male, servant society at Throp Green and this male society is linked to hints of eroticism and sex. However, details are obscured and multiple, unclear versions of events are included so that it’s never clear if Branwell takes Edmund to the stables to sleep with him, to show him what happens in the stables (knowing that the boy needs someone to help him understand his sexuality) or if Branwell and the grooms try to keep him from the stables. Martin also inserts other complicating factors to confuse the readers judgement of this situation. Other characters construct a judgement about why Branwell is dismissed. Anne thinks she’s seen Branwell kiss the boy, Edmund’s father believes he’s been interfering with his son and Branwell’s narrative admits that he will have to create a fiction about why he was dismissed (he creates ficticious letters from the boys mother, Lydia Robinson) which all lead the reader to think they know exactly what went on. At the same time Branwell’s innocence is insisted on in a series of flashbacks that could be construed innocently, or lasciviously. Then there are the little details which could change the entire way the reader interpret events if they choose to let them (the gardener who was also dismissed shortly after Branwell, Branwell lingering outside Mrs Robinson’s door, one of the grooms who has ‘lost his way slips out of one of the other rooms’ just as Branwell is leaving the house).

Not being a Bronte devote I don’t know if Martin chooses to avoid making Edmund and Branwell’s relationship definitely clear because there isn’t any evidence for it and so the literary style of obscuring the definite fits well with Martin’s revisionist strategy, or if he just favours this literary style for artistic reasons. I do know that Martin has created a piece of literature that makes me believe in the whole Branwell that he presents and that encourages me to sympathise with his character, without having to forgive him all his faults. I felt for him because he deserved sympathy, but at the same time I felt like I got a decent perspective on just where the limits of my sympathy should lie (I don’t think I’m ever going to be totally sympathetic to someone who may have slept with such a young child, no matter what time period a book is set in). He wasn’t all bad, but he had some serious faults and they weren’t all created by the rather bad upbringing of his family. I think Martin does a good job of showing that pressure doesn’t take away your own agency and having agency doesn’t diminish the pressures you feel. I will grant that the expectations Branwell finds placed on him in this book do not help him and maybe he could have become a great man, or at least a good man, without such unrealistic pressures, but no one made him pick up that bottle again and again.

As Martin is so even handed in his treatment of Branwell I find myself more willing to open my mind to the possibility that Charlotte’s actions towards the end of her brother’s life might not have been exactly generous. I do feel like there’s an increasing bias towards Charlotte that grows as the book approaches its end, although Martin does include prophetic snippets in earlier parts of the book to show Charlotte’s support for Branwell’s work after his death. The increasingly stern, self-preserving picture of Charlotte that Martin creates in the final pages of the novel means that readers can’t be sure if she genuinely rated her brother as an artist, or if she was just perpetuating this myth to help the family. This is just another example of the uncertainty that Martin creates which makes this book so enjoyable and tricksy.

Does anyone have any further recommendations for historical fiction that is written using literary fiction techniques (obviously I need to re-read ‘Wolf Hall’ when the sequel comes out, but what else). It is
World Book Day, I can indulge my massive wishlist by adding a few new titles.

PS. Turns out Douglas A Martin has written about The Lost Boys which is only my favourite Kiefer/vampire/80s movie evah. Oh if I could find that work I would be the happiest lady!

Wednesday, 2 March 2011

Nerds Heart YA Nominations - Get 'Em in Quick

Just a quick note that you have until midnight GMT 7th of May (next Monday) to nominate books for NHYA 2011. We’ve got some fab nominations so far, but we always want more.

Note: Remember judges can also nominate books. We'll work to make sure that you don't judge a book you nominated and only Amy and I will know who nominated which book.


Personal PS: I've been feeling crummy for a couple of days and took yesterday off, whcih is why I haven't been around a lot. Not to sound like a Victorian governess but I think I caught a chill sitting in our office (on Monday my hands were begining to go numb, it was very cold). I'm feeling better now and can do productive things like reply to your comments tonight. Hope everyone is having a nice week :)